a heartfelt poem please read

[jagged]

I was that which others did not want to be.
I went where others feared to go, and did what others failed to do.

I asked nothing from those who gave nothing.and relucatantly accepted the thought of eternal loneliness...Should I fail.

I have seen the face of terror; felt the stinging cold of fear; and enjoyed the sweet taste of a moment's love.

I have cried, pained, and hoped...but most of all, I have lived times others woud say were best forgotten.

At least smomeday I will be able to say that I was proud of what i was...a Soldier

[Dog Snatch]

I think the first line said it all.

Some parts could probably be fixed up, better descriptions/word choice.

Great poem, I felt what you wanted me to feel, even while that porn star avatar was in sight.

[Saltbitch]

Your poem sucks shit through a fucking funnel....mainly because you can't lay claim to ANY of it. Keep on dreamin', turd. :?

I can't believe you lured me in with the 'heartfelt' and 'please read' crap. If I didn't have a serious hard-on for you DEPshits, I'd probably go bash my nuts with a wrench for being so gullable. Instead, I think I'll just add to your already lengthy punishment, Jaggoff.

[Creeping Death]

I was that which others did not want to be.
I went where others feared to go, and did what others failed to do.

I asked nothing from those who gave nothing.and relucatantly accepted the thought of eternal loneliness...Should I fail.

I have seen the face of terror; felt the stinging cold of fear; and enjoyed the sweet taste of a moment's love.

I have cried, pained, and hoped...but most of all, I have lived times others woud say were best forgotten.

At least smomeday I will be able to say that I was proud of what i was...a Soldier

Nice Poem. Did you write it?


NO YOU DIDN’T ASS HAT!! One word for ya .... PLAIGARISM!!!!!

This is on one of my plaques given to me by my bros:


Airborne Ranger

I was that which others could not be.

I went where others feared to go, and did what others failed to do.

I asked nothing from those who gave nothing, and readily accepted the thought of eternal lonliness... should I fail.

I have seen the face of terror; felt the stinging cold of fear; and enjoyed the sweet taste of a moment’s love.

I have cried, pained, and hoped... but most of all, I have lived times others would say are best forgotten.

At least I can say I am proud of what I am ......

An Airborne Ranger.




NOW PUSH FOR NOT MAKING IT CLEAR THAT YOU WERE NOT THE AUTHOR!!!!!

[jagged]

Roger that Ranger Creeping Death, and Ranger Saltbitch. I will be more clear next time

[Silverback]

Bump so everyone can re-enjoy this horrible fucking poem

[jsmurphy]

Thanks, Ranger Silverback, very fucking much.

[rgrpuck]

Its like listening to Lee Greenwood...........