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Mix # 2
The male lead is Nick3/75
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I liked it. Good song - the timing between the music and the band playing was spot on - I've seen worse on TV.
Not to be a dick or anything, but at 4:15 and 4:32 of the video, there's a part where the sound has you hitting a crash and the video doesn't show it. I realize that's not the same kit that you play, and y'all were doing a mili-vanilli, etc. but it's a small detail. Different people look at different band members during a performance - I watch the drummer.
Damn good video.
Not to be a dick or anything, but at 4:15 and 4:32 of the video, there's a part where the sound has you hitting a crash and the video doesn't show it. I realize that's not the same kit that you play, and y'all were doing a mili-vanilli, etc. but it's a small detail. Different people look at different band members during a performance - I watch the drummer.
Damn good video.
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Nicely done rough cut, great song, but none of your guitars are plugged in. :)
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No be a dick, need all the critiques before final mix.42L5V wrote:Not to be a dick or anything, but at 4:15 and 4:32 of the video, there's a part where the sound has you hitting a crash and the video doesn't show it. I realize that's not the same kit that you play, and y'all were doing a mili-vanilli, etc. but it's a small detail. Different people look at different band members during a performance - I watch the drummer.
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Since I wrote the song and did 90% of the creative shit behind the scenes I missed my drumming whle wathcing for the other stuff, but I am on it!
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Awesome video, didn't expect a slow song from you guys but the composure and transitions were done very well.
I couldn't think of much to give you food for thought other than this.
During the part where Nick/Girlie walk down the steps there is a pause at
1:09 then the vocalist sings at the same pitch and it sort of dies (briefly). Normally during a pause in a song the singer will escalate the vocal in some manner to heighten the intensity of the tune
For Example: at 1:23 of the song the lead singer does exactly that, he escalates the vocal for greater effect. I thought the pause/transition at 1:41 and at 1:44 was excellent.
At 3:24 he sings in the same tone but it’s done perfectly because you can tell it’s wrapping up and again he then escalates the pitch to heighten the intensity.
Overall it damn near was like an MTV video, and on what I assume was a small budget I think you guys did one helluva job. (How you got Nick to whisper "I love you" on the video I'll never know that part I laughed at but only because he's one of our brothers).
I'd say with a few very slight modifications it's ready for the CD to start being cranked out or a record deal to be inked. Damn good job Bubba.
I couldn't think of much to give you food for thought other than this.
During the part where Nick/Girlie walk down the steps there is a pause at
1:09 then the vocalist sings at the same pitch and it sort of dies (briefly). Normally during a pause in a song the singer will escalate the vocal in some manner to heighten the intensity of the tune
For Example: at 1:23 of the song the lead singer does exactly that, he escalates the vocal for greater effect. I thought the pause/transition at 1:41 and at 1:44 was excellent.
At 3:24 he sings in the same tone but it’s done perfectly because you can tell it’s wrapping up and again he then escalates the pitch to heighten the intensity.
Overall it damn near was like an MTV video, and on what I assume was a small budget I think you guys did one helluva job. (How you got Nick to whisper "I love you" on the video I'll never know that part I laughed at but only because he's one of our brothers).
I'd say with a few very slight modifications it's ready for the CD to start being cranked out or a record deal to be inked. Damn good job Bubba.
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I thought the video came out pretty good...... the one thing I saw that I didn't like too much Bubba, was the mouthing "I love you" towards the end. I dunno, something ain't jiving right with it, but then again maybe I'm just critiquing myself too much..... what do you guys think, aside from the fact that its "fucking gay"..... lol
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He was free is and is a lot better looking than us in the band!Cliv03 wrote:Pretty good video....Had my broad watch it, she was wondering why you guys cast a tall, gay, skinny dude as the main actor....
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I REALLY liked the song and the video!!!!
The only things I would change would be .....instead of , "What about us?" he should say, "HEY, FUCK YOU BITCH, YOU SELF CENTERED CUNT!"
and.....instead of mouthing, "I love you." he should have mouthed, "Fucking bitch!"
But hey, that's just my interpretation. :D
The only things I would change would be .....instead of , "What about us?" he should say, "HEY, FUCK YOU BITCH, YOU SELF CENTERED CUNT!"
and.....instead of mouthing, "I love you." he should have mouthed, "Fucking bitch!"
But hey, that's just my interpretation. :D
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I liked it! Hated the "I love you" he mouthed. He should have acted a little more pissed off at the cafe.
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