I hear ya but............................more than one man has done everything he can to educate his wife by supporting her in college and then have her run off to do her own thing because she doesn't need him anymore. I wrote the song about that because that is what happened to me and my first wife. I wish all the misery and failure that life can bring her. Since she left me my wishes have come true! :)Julieanne wrote: I think a real man should be portrayed as encouraging his love to follow her dreams, but still be able to be sad about a separation.
Video, ruff mix not done yet!
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dude. duuuuude. what happens when you let some gay fuck, Master Thespian, overactor ad lib? you end up with "I love you".
and the cafe argument should go. he does sound like a whiny bitch. have them sitting there, show the emotion, but cut their audio.
for the plane scene, get a permit and go film at a terminal gate at the airport, then cut to some stock airliner footage. maybe him standing there at the gate, a wave, her in the plane window, then him walking away... plane takeoff. fade...
she damn sure wasn't dressed well enough to be getting into her own King Air...
and they should be wearing different clothes every scene. looked like she never changed hers.
otherwise it was great! :D
and the cafe argument should go. he does sound like a whiny bitch. have them sitting there, show the emotion, but cut their audio.
for the plane scene, get a permit and go film at a terminal gate at the airport, then cut to some stock airliner footage. maybe him standing there at the gate, a wave, her in the plane window, then him walking away... plane takeoff. fade...
she damn sure wasn't dressed well enough to be getting into her own King Air...
and they should be wearing different clothes every scene. looked like she never changed hers.
otherwise it was great! :D
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Well, I guess we can agree that that's a story that goes both ways... damn them all to HELL!RRDTm3 wrote:I hear ya but............................more than one man has done everything he can to educate his wife by supporting her in college and then have her run off to do her own thing because she doesn't need him anymore. I wrote the song about that because that is what happened to me and my first wife. I wish all the misery and failure that life can bring her. Since she left me my wishes have come true! :)Julieanne wrote: I think a real man should be portrayed as encouraging his love to follow her dreams, but still be able to be sad about a separation.
Thanks for the insight.
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It don't matter, the video still makes you look like a butt pirate.Ford375 wrote:link???
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Much better. I still (IMO) don't like the I Love You. A stare then just a head dropping or just some other show of emotion. But over all 2 thumbs up.
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The "I love you." part was serial killeresque. He should have kicked her out of the chair into oncoming traffic.McD wrote:I liked it! Hated the "I love you" he mouthed. He should have acted a little more pissed off at the cafe.
The song's too gentile. It needs some emo kids that cry and have runny eye-liner and cut them selves at the end.
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