Well jagged someone will be along to square you away pretty soon but ill give you some pointers.
Its whats up..... not sup..or wassup.
This isnt a rap video so its best to work on writing in english.
Second its probably a good idea to use the big happy lettters at the begining of important words like....
Airborne....and maybe even Ranger.
If you choose not to follow the advice then thats cool too,because im just gonna sit back and watch.
You are getting ready to enter a whole new world as an 11b,a world where a fuck up like saying"ya" instead of "Yes" could have you low crawling till you puke.
Just trying to help